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6690 No. 6690 watch
I can’t find the cure to this sickness.
This intensity that brews like a thunderstorm in my heart.
I’ve lost faith in myself, is there any truth to my song?
Dead Silence (11/16/2009 2:14:57 AM): I can’t see you anymore.
Your shadow has disappeared in the nights grasp.
All that’s left of you is a shaky memory.
The scars of your hand have been laid down by force.
And the pigment runs redder in my heart then in my skin.
You selfish bitch, you’ve catered to your needs and left me to deal my issues alone.
My nerves have been shot and ripped apart by distant hands.
There are holes in my armor.
Lost in this hailstorm of insecurity.
I blame you for these tapped veins.
You’ve mined my body of its strength.
Sucked up all that you could and left me to crumble into dust.
Dead Silence (11/16/2009 2:15:04 AM): Is there hope for us?
Can we build monuments out of hope?
Can’t see!
Going blind!
Tipping over into darkness.
Will you save what hates you?
What have we become?
My skin is cold, I can feel mini artic climates freezing my motion.
Leave me alone.
I’ve hated my thoughts.
My words complicate the progression of my transformation.
Are words not suppose to set us free?
But all I see are chains on my hands and feet.
Dead Silence (11/16/2009 2:15:12 AM): Is there a way to kill you?
You’re a sedative, ticking off my life.
My sweet seductive coma.
Lure me away from morals.
Strip me further from god’s values.
I’ve been naked in front of you for so long now.
Blending into the rain.
Becoming the chill in your fingertips.
Encompass me.
Let me eat you from the inside.
Corrosive touches will leave you still.
Render you in sequential.
Can you realize that you’re the fragile one?
I’m here to break you with my choices.

Wrote this a hour ago
>> No. 6696
Read like 5 lines in. Dude....
>> No. 6697
>>6696 pssh lol
>> No. 6699
This is dark nd emotional!

plz post more!
>> No. 6702
Read first few lines whilst cringing.
got here "mini artic climates" lol'd and stopped.
I'd say stop being emo, but that doesn't seem likely, so just stop writing about it maybe? Saging for shitty poem.
>> No. 6712
jesus christ this is terrible
what did you do, type it into AIM and copy it over? I sure hope you don't want the person you sent it to to ever respect you again!
>> No. 6720
Okay okay...I know this isn't my greatest piece of poetry.
Lol but is it that bad...?
Jesus.
xD
>> No. 6721
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6721
Your flesh is a sweet splash of nectorine on my tongue.
Kissing my sense with its slippery salt and adrenaline.
Can you outlast the endorphins crushing your lips?
I can feed you my honeyed poison as long as you can swallow it.
Never fear the rush of fuel leaving your body, I will be there to clean up your red existence.
Let's dramatically decline to the lowest level of the dark.
Where we can only feel our hands tracing syallbales on each other throats.
Light perforates the ink I left on your intestines.
Black hand prints suffocating your rare perfume.
A noxious smell of human gas, bloody and digestion making me dizzy.
I can splay you open so elegantly, just baby, don't squirm to hard.
Connective tissue render perfectly from muscle and ivory.
Don't worry, I love you more then I could ever say to you.
Hold still, there is no anger, no hate in your demise.
I won't let you fade away from me, I'm not wearing this human blindfold called consequence.
Let me in.
Pull me in knee deep into your breath and system.
Be with me forever, promise.
Promise this with your blood and body.
I can see that your mine.
I long for you to be the process of systematic decomposition within me.

Hand lay a imprint of red hearts twisted into bloody abstract on shimmery silk.
You've been layed on warm snow, I've given your richness, severed exquisiteness.
Don't scream, only swallow this soft sheen of a feeling.
Bead of sweat, pheromones buzzing and colliding like missiles in the air.
Sparking atomic gratification on my brow and lips.
Linus.
Nestled in the crook of your pallor I feel safe, warmth spreading and destroying the last of any regret.
Hands plunder inside, grasping garshings of ruby treasure.
Tearing free strands of wet, glistening pearl.
Can you see it?
Your body is working with me, were fighting for the same end.
Total bodily release.

Smile, I'm tasting you.
Better the anyone can ever taste someone.
>> No. 6742
>>6721
>Splash of nectorine
Do you actually mean the orange or did you just mistype nectar?
>> No. 6746
Clean that fuckin tylenol off the floor, read a fuckin book, and stop being 15 years old.
Then maybe you could write some decent poetry.
>> No. 6769
>>6746 fuck you :D
I write beautiful poetry.
Ohgawd.
Spelling Nazi.
Shitty Troll is shitty.
Lets see you put some up you dumb negro.
>> No. 6799
>>6769

Jeez don't get uppity. If you post your poems on the internet, and especially on an skippy niggaymous imageboard you are likely to get negative criticisms.

If you want a pat on the back for what you wrote go post it on DeviantArt. Get your panties out of a twist.
>> No. 6826
>>6799 aww i though we were having fun here slamming each other.
dun be so serious :C
>> No. 7196
>>6769
I'm not trolling.
Trolling would be giving you undeserved praise and motivating you to write more of this shit. I wasn't talking about spelling, I was saying read some literature that was written by someone who could write worth a damn and didn't have assburgers/attention seeking behaviors. Maybe it would help your own writing.
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